Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree (or) dis-agree.

Few people believe that

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is necessary to ride

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in order to decrease

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accident

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. I completely agree with the statement regarding

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safety

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. Today, we are living in

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world where

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accidents became more common and

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safety

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is a major problem. If the government will take strict action on minors by realising the legislation on the minimum age for driving any vehicle. If these

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will come into work

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there will be many possibilities of reducing the accident (or) deaths. Because when these

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will follow

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of

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and

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will get decrease on roads.

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automatically the ratio of incidents happening will

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decrease. These are the measures we can follow to maintain

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while riding.

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, if

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come on roads according to their

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number

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vehicles

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should come on the

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on these particular by following the even and odd sequence. Apart from

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, the government plays a major role in implementing

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rules

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. By appointing more traffic officers for one who won't follow the

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property should take them

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consideration

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technology has developed very fastly that bg fixing the sensors on roads they can catch the person who has violated the

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. To conclude,

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safety

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is necessary for every individual in the world. By keeping and by following the

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and not allowing the minors to ride the

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. By following these precautions we can overcome

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