Governemnts should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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public infrastructure
operational costs
mass transit
urban development
energy efficiency
socio-economic disparities
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