You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir, I, Swati Arora, the residence of Oxford Colony. Recently, I have gone through with one of an article printed in your magazine "Daily Total" related to my society

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I had decided that I will write a letter to you about the inaccurate situation described.

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, I want to bring to your attention that in my area there is a lot of greenery and lots of people visiting on the daily basis because of specialized street

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but the wrong information was stated that the area is not at all clean and the public dustbins are usually full.

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, the road is usually full of rubbish,

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, the place is in quite a good condition and there is no

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litter even in the nearby areas. As I have mentioned,

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place is the hub of

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which forced lots of youngsters to travel here just to taste

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dishes, especially

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bloggers.

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is the only source of income for the street

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sellers, and

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might gives an adverse effect on their earning source. There are a bunch of people who read

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magazine and

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will drag down the image of the magazine as well. I believe the best you can do is to report

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which I think is the appropriate action and appeal to the upper management of yours to change the misleading information. I am hoping for a positive response on

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matter. Yours Sincerely, Swati Arora