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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

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Being happy is always considered the most important thing in life. In my opinion,
happiness
 can't be described but it feels, it sees on someone's face or their behaviour.
Happiness
 can always be achieved by ourselves only because
noone
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no one
 can make a person happy until the person wants to be happy. It is pointed out that, it is very much tough to explain in words that how can
happiness
 feel but it can be seen or felt by
people
's reactions or in their behaviour.
For instance
, a pregnant lady can't describe her
happiness
that
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 how she feels when her baby moves in her womb. It is beyond the
happiness
 she feels but at the same
time
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 it is very much tough to explain that feeling in words.
Happiness
 can be found in
evey
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every
 little
things
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. Some
people
 achieve their
happines
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happiness
in
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by
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 planting trees or some
people
 finds
happiness
 by helping others.There are many important factors in our
live
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which
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that
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 can relate to
the
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apply
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happiness
.
Such
 as
,
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 choices, places, activities, etc. Some
people
 find
happiness
 at their
work place
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workplace
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, some
finds
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 it with their friends, some finds it with their families and some finds it with themselves. In the conclusion,
happines
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happiness
 can be achieved
by
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in
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 many ways if
people
 try to be happy by themselves in their lives but it is very much tough
to
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for
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 everyone to define it in words.
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