In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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of transport will be autonomous,
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, buses and trucks will no longer need human drivers to control it on the road. In
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it is mentioned how
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new technology will benefit us humans to have
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and safe journey. Driverless vehicles are making our life easy and safe. New advanced
cars
and trucks are now connected to each other through the internet that helps vehicles to communicate and share information about traffic jams and any possible dangers which helps for better stemless travel. With no human errors in
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connected technology will provide a safe journey to owers and passengers
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inside.
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logistics
sectors will
benifit
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benefit
more thought
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advancement as
vehivles
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vehicles
will be
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tracked and can
delivered
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as expected time.
However
, we can not depend 100% on machines as there can be
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technical
erros
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errors
error
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chance
of trama can accured. these
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items are well connected with each
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, with one
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or in
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terms through a bug, all system of these
cars
can
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and can be
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. in
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conclusion
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this
explains how
peoples
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people
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will get
benifit
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benefit
benefits
through safe and timely managed
journey
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throught
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through
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this driverless
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this driverless car
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cars
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