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The continued ride in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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 number of the world
population
 is a more serious risk for
earth
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the earth
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 than plastic pollution and increasing temperatures. Countries
such
 as India and China have already put strict laws to control their citizen count as these are the
fastest growing
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 nations. Increasing numbers of citizens can affect the resources of the country. Issues
such
 as hunger are the main problems facing Africa. The USA and many developed nations help poor lands by providing help but
this
 is not enough.
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 reason for the increasing
population
 is ignorance of the government and people not knowing about family management and its benefits. In India, Today in many villages, people are still unaware that the problems can occur with more children they have
then
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 they should be.
This
 rise
of
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the
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population
 numbers can cause great problems to the world we live in.
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Natural resources are less,
however
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 more than we should. Factories
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 produce supplies for the
peoples
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people
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on the other hand
 are the primary source of harmful gasses. These manufacturing industries are working on 100% capacity yet they are not enough to provide enough goods to the people. It is predicted that by 2050 the world's
population
 will reach 10
billions
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,
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 scientists are looking for ways to control medical crises that can not handle the current numbers of doctors we have as per regulations. humanity have reached
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 and mars, but
serious
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 problem we face is still
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earth
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 which is overpopulation is the main factor.
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