Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Overweight in children is one of the essential factors connected with population well-being, particularly in the current day.

However

, it is thought that the authority should concern

this

situation and find some solutions to

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. From my point of view, I strongly agree with

this

statement. In the

next

paragraphs, supporting reasons with actual examples will be outlined in detail.

First

of all, there are some claims that plus-size pupils affect the overall citizen's

health

.

For instance

, the World

Health

Organisation showed the research that overweight children are likely to get serious diseases easier

such

as high blood pressure and diabetes. As the result, these young populations are growing to be an adult with

health

problems in the future. From

this

report, it seems to me that the officials should take action with young obese to prevent community sickness.

Secondly

, there are some opinions supporting the idea that chubby people are less energetic than the normal population.

For example

, the research from the Nation Wellbeing in Thailand showed that the activeness in overweight people is fewer than other physical human types by 50 per cent.

Therefore

, as there are many obese in the future, the nation will grow slower than before. From

this

research and prediction, it is clear to believe that the Nation

Health

Organisation should take responsibility for

this

problem as soon as possible. In conclusion,

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believe that the government should hand in

this

situation because

this

problem affects

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community

health

and population activeness. to tackle

this

problem, they should provide some fitness facilities to the young generation

such

as physical exercise class in a primary course in every school and educate basic healthcare to pupils.