Some people think that offenders should be put in prison. Others, however, believe that providing offenders with education and training is more effective than putting them in prison. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no doubting the fact that the main purpose of putting criminals behind bars is arguable. while it's a commonly held belief that the offenders should be locked up away from their victims.

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view. The question is, what is the right way to tackle guiltier? In

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essay, I'm going to discuss both views and draw my own opinion. there are several certain advantages of sentenced criminals in prison.

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, the main purpose of Strick policy is that to ensure the safety of other citizens.

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, they must be penalized for their crime to realize their guilt.

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, forced punishments

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as a deterrent.

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, putting lawbreakers in jail might be Counterproductive. Several psychologists insist that many offenders had mental or emotional stress as a consequence of

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prison. and they suggested that community service is better than punishment.

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, penalizations, as prime

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punishment, could create a violent culture and encourage people to revenge.

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, a criminal record won't make getting a job possible matter. Another point to consider, presentation it is the responsibility of the police, they should involve with the schools and keep in close contact with people to deter mischievous intentions. In conclusion, I believe that the policemen should protect the societies by punishing those who

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committing a crime especially if it's a serious crime

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as rape and murder. and

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that, they could rehabilitate The wrongdoer In jail to ensure that they don't re-offend.