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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion

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With the advancement of modern technology and medicine, science has reduced morbidity and mortality rate to a greater extend. People are delighted to have their loved ones beside them throughout longer generations. Parents get to see their grandparents for a longer period of time and families and nothing can be more fulfilling than getting a close friend , relative or family member during festive occasions and celebrations. The older generations are very important as mentors and world leaders as their countless experience learned from the past is priceless.
However
 So , prolonging
life
 expectancy can be viewed as a cause of suffering among a few especially someone who is in the end stages of his
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cancer. That's why in certain countries, euthanasia is permissible and granted to these patients. Having a larger population of the elderly means more economic burden for the government to provide funding for food, shelter and medical bills especially for those who lack adequate financial support from their family members. Non-profit government organisations and social welfare need to come hand in hand to provide these facilities for them
such
 as placing them in the old folks home which is well equipped by a caregiver. With the current situation of the growing population surpassing the employment rate, increment of
life
 expectancy especially the ageing population will add to the burden of families who are financially unable to support them. In my opinion , increasing
life
 expectancy is good but it can lead to both a positive and negative impact on the country and the government has to come up with a policy that supports the older generation
such
 as prolonging the retirement age to allow them to work longer. In
this
 case the burden towards the younger generation not only will be lesser but the older generation will be less likely to be neglected.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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