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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

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Technology has become an important part of our life.
Thus
, it has made life easier and let us able to buy or do many things with one click only.
Nevertheless
, it caused many new health problems for humans.
Besides
 that, drugs nowadays are unable to heal the patients and in my point of
view
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 they have to go back to the old type of treatments
such
 as therapy treatment. Lifestyle changing growing up, in these days,
people
 can go shopping by their mobile phone without any need to go by transportation to any mall, or they can transfer many by application on the phone
instead
 of going to the bank. While
this
 modern lifestyle has many advantages in our life, it made the human can’t walk for a long distance because of joint problems, and struggle pain in back or legs or have redeyes caused by using smart devices for most of the time in the days and becoming overweight. Whereas the treatment ways developed by the time, had become more accurate, and the number of hospitals is increasing, but still unable to treat some of the diseases, it is not always the solution to do a surgery, sometimes all
what
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 you need is to go to a gym or do physical activities in your home,
this
 is the way how the old
people
 treat
them self
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 before
couple
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 of decades, and as we can see they are less stressful and live for roughly 8 years longer than
people
 these days. My aunt went to a doctor because her arm hurts her, and he decide to do surgery on her arm,
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 she stilled suffering from her arm, after that she went to a therapist and she has physical therapy, she is becoming better nowadays. Modern lifestyle increased the percentage of
people
 who suffer from stress
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 19%. It is very important to save how our grandfather and grandmother treat themself and use these ways to help us improve our health.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • chronic conditions
  • holistic approach
  • preventive care
  • natural remedies
  • cultural heritage
  • ancestral knowledge
  • integration
  • complementary healthcare
  • regulation
  • standardization
  • scientific validation
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