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Of all public transportation options, a metro is the most convenient way to get around a large city. Do you agree or disagree

Transportation
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 infrastructure plays a vital role in the development of the city, especially in metropolitical
cities
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. Due to
increasing
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 population
Metro
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 is considered as
best
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the best
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 option to release the heavy burden of public transport. I strongly agree that
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introducing
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metro
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a metro
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 system in
cities
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 has
much
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a much
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 more
efficiency
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 and positive outcome. To start with,
metro
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 fares are considerably low in large
cities
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 in comparison to other transport options. Because authorities main intention is to provide more commute services to
public
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the public
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not
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a
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financial status.
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, In India major
cities
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 like Mumbai and Delhi , the average fare is approximately Rs.30.
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, every section of
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society can easily access them.
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 to
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, it is expensive to travel
bu
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by
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other mode
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another mode
other modes
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 of
transportation
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 like
taxi
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a taxi
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 or private cab.
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, metros are widely available in all major destinations with
less
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 waiting time.
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 is the reason
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transportation
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the transportation
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 department has doubled the number of
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metro
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the metro
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 at busy routes to tackle the public demand of transport.
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, by using
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metro
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the metro
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 individuals can avoid the problem of big traffic congestions which will
also
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their work productivity. To conclude, after analysing the situation it is not wrong to say that the
metro
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 is
cheapest
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the cheapest
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 and most reliable mode of
transportation
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 in
cities
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.

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