Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter, Explain why you are writing Describe why you find the increase inappropriate What you want to do now

Dear Mr Amiri, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the amount of money you request for the rent of your home is not

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and I can not accept that . I want to mention that your apartment is not new and it is built about 10 years ago , and in the past year I asked you several times to fix the problems that I had in my unit ,but you ignored all of them .

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, all the doors and windows have a lot of noise and they are really annoying me,so I could not sleep at night .

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, the electrical system of the house is totally old and most of the time we have problem with it .

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if you want to increase your rent ,I can not really afford it ,and I really prefer to rent another place which has

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better condition. I am looking forward to receiving your answer as soon as possible. Best Regards, Sara Ahmadi

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Jan 4, 2022

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