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As if you
didn’
t
wish to make up a quarrel As if your heart didn’
t
tremble when you saw the notification As if you didn’
t
find out about the first attempt As if you weren
’t
constantly worried As if his name was not something that came up to your mind as soon as the pair of stranger’s hands wrapped your waist in the darkness As if you don’t
blame yourself for such
a weird body response by present days As if you were finally
set free, well, at least you thought you were. As if you stopped thinking about him completely As if he didn’
t
apologize for all the things he has ever did or said wrong As if you didn’
t
text each other all night As if you didn’
t
find yourself suffering from insomnia again As if you didn’
t
doubt the relationship you’ve had by that moment As if he wasn
’t
a fucking machiavellian he actually is and didn’
t
ask for a kiss and wine As if you didn’
t
want to kiss him As if he didn’
t
have a starring role in your dreams afterwards “Now I can bargain for wine and smooches again” (No you can’t
) As if your ex didn’
t
understand everything sooner than you As if you to didn’
t
lie to yourself again that it’s nothing As if you weren
’t
ashamed of it As if you didn’
t
manage to kick it out of your head for a while
, might thank your crumbling sanity for giving you a favor to lose an ability to feel anything As if you didn’
t
receive his birthday wishes As if Eve ate from the tree of knowledge of good and evil just because she was hungry for knowledge As if you weren
't
building the walls sitting in the cab, on your way to have just a friendly dinner As it you didn't
want to turn back, to your bed where you've been crying yourself to sleep for 3 month straight As if you didn't
see each other anyway As if you weren
't
happy to see him As if you didn't
try to keep your face As if you didn't
fail As if you didn't
cry in his arms As if you weren
't
ashamed of your condition, but more importantly As if you weren
't
ashamed of missing being in those particular arms As if you didn't
come out of the wall As if you weren
't
standing no guard in front of him As if you didn't
try to kiss him "I am simply out of options to express my gratitude. Thank you" What a liar As if 9 is not the point of no return As if it wasn
't
raining and there was no wine, was red this
time As if he didn't
count your ribs As if you two didn't
lose it "How far should I go so that you stop me " Far enough already so that I don't
want to leave anywhere As if you two didn't
want each other As if he wasn
't
that stupid to notice As if there was no more bargaining and menaces to be hurt again As if you didn't
have your saving mantra "Thank God I don't
feel a thing, otherwise
I'd be completely damaged" As if it wasn
't
bold of you to keep trying to trick everyone including yourself As if he didn't
confess As if you didn't
refuse to believe his words but were curious about it As if temptation to have him at least for a whilre
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't
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite