The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show changes in Happy Valley Shopping Centre in 1982 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at
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diagrams provided reveals a stark comparison of the radical alterations of Happy Valley Shopping Centre from 1982 to 2012.
Overall
, the great transformation is the redevelopment in
expansion
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the expansion
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of the mall and
rearrangement
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the rearrangement
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of its in-house facilities. As for the
north-west
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area
of Happy Valley Mall, its outdoor lake in 1982 was demolished to make room for a furniture retailer. Going inside the shopping centre, there was a coffee shop and food shop at the upper in the old map but in 2012, they were wiped out and divided into two distinct functions namely the sports and electronics store. A linear array of themed restaurants made a move to the eastern wall of the centre, replacing sports and electronics shops.
Moreover
, the lobby
area
that directly reached after coming from the entry in 1982 was removed to make way for a bigger amusement
area
. In terms of the outdoor
area
, the path, which led to the entrance was replaced by a spacious car park. Meanwhile, the toilets and lift to the higher floor stayed intact.
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