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The materialistic mundanity imposed on our kind does not allow practices of such profoundness

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Dear self, I can not even remember how long it has been since I
last
 wrote to you. The materialistic mundanity imposed on our kind does not allow practices of
such
 profoundness, for
this
 might give them the courage and the strength they need to
break through
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. I wanted to tell you about the curious unfolding of things around here. As you have already imagined, it concerns the new
place
 I have moved to. You’re
no
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 strange to my presumptions about
this
 city before I came here, so you can imagine how disappointed I was in
this
place
 as well as in myself when I got to know it for what it really is. I will try to explain it all, for I believe
this
 will comfort me to some extent. I decided to come here so I could put all that misery behind me and start afresh. No! I am not going to indulge in reminiscence of the past, for I know it is utterly pointless. I came here with nothing but mere optimism swirling around my head. I was rejoicing over the fact that
finally
, I was able to bring myself to move on. I was happy and excited unaware of the things the new
place
 was going to unfold for me. It was as if all that suffering had vanished away and the light at the end of the tunnel had revealed the finish line, but it did not turn out to be as I had imagined it. Even here my demons do not seem to want to relinquish me. It is just the way it has been for all of these years. The
place
 that I thought to be thoroughly different
than
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 all the rest have proved me wrong! Unsettling chaos has invaded my life and here I am yearning for peace! My doctor told me something the other day that has been keeping my mind busy. She said peace does not mean to be in a
place
 where there is no chaos, havoc, or madness. It means to be in the midst of those things and still be calm in your heart. How dearly I wish to get a hold of that! Sincerely yours, Paria Rezayan
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