You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Romeo, Hope you and your family are doing great. I am just writing to let you know that I got a new job two weeks ago. As you know, I had been working for Exl business services for 2 years.

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I worked hard and efficiently, there was no hope of getting a promotion or raise. Yet, there was no hope

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promotion and improvement in the salary package. As

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was de-motivating me, I decided to quit the job and look for a better work opportunity. Fortunately, in no time I got a job offer at Indian Restaurants Company-

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is a different sector from my previous work field.

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, it brought me benefits

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-level position and a 100 % hike in my compensation. The work atmosphere is quite friendly and energetic.

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, I have some exciting news to share with you. My younger brother is getting married. The wedding date is 22nd March 2020 and attached is the invitation card for you. As you are my best friend, my family would

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love to meet you. I am sure you will have great fun and memorable moments once you are here. Hoping to hear from you soon Kind Regards Name

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

“By definition, charity is generosity in offering money, food, and help to the needy. To some people, such kindness should be boundless, others argue for a limit to it.” Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

Many people think it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort on it themselves. Why is it so and what can be done about it?

Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?