Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a popular tendency that well-known

people

tend to be famous due to their vivid attraction or well-offness

instead

of their work achievements and

this

can set a harmful

example

for young teenagers. In my point of view, I totally agree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, it is possible for adolescents to catch the glamour or being rich to be the standard of living.

For

example

, Chi Pu, despite being a Viet Nam singer, is not famous because of their voice, or outstanding achievements due to the scandals about the controversial opinion about the singer artist that all

people

can be singers even without talent.

However

, she still has a huge fandom, who tend to see her ways of living as a modern young age lifestyle and want to achieve with hopes that have stable jobs which enhance paying for the bill of the high-cost

such

as

gadget

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, luxury restaurants or

high end

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clothes, or even have voices in the society or even can impact other

people

. In the far future, it goes without saying that it can be the most harmful disadvantage that impacts

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the

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young

people

.

Moreover

, the drawbacks that adolescents set as an

example

of celebrity

life

is that they can mimic the bad tempers of these

people

or even come across as the young trend.

For

example

, Kim Kardashian who is a symptom of fashion,

people

tend to be crazy about her

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outfits, or ornaments.

This

could be related to the fact that the young pull all their revenue on these types of stuff and they particularly erase their minds having no idea that Kim Kardashian just wants to promote her domestic brand’s sales. It is detrimental for young

people

to copy the negative habits of

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popular

people

such

as smoking, drinking or even using drugs. It can be said that there are a variety of actions that celebrities do in bad ways but it is easy for teenagers to copy. In conclusion, it seems to me that there are several reasons that adolescents should not see their

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celebrities as examples to lead their own

life

. It might accidentally harm their

life

if they copy the habits of well-known

people

to their standards of

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.