Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a popular tendency that well-known
people
tend to be famous due to their vivid attraction or well-offness
instead
of their work achievements and
this
can set a harmful
example
for young teenagers. In my point of view, I totally agree with
this
statement.
Firstly
, it is possible for adolescents to catch the glamour or being rich to be the standard of living.
For
example
, Chi Pu, despite being a Viet Nam singer, is not famous because of their voice, or outstanding achievements due to the scandals about the controversial opinion about the singer artist that all
people
can be singers even without talent.
However
, she still has a huge fandom, who tend to see her ways of living as a modern young age lifestyle and want to achieve with hopes that have stable jobs which enhance paying for the bill of the high-cost
such
as
gadget
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, luxury restaurants or
high end
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clothes, or even have voices in the society or even can impact other
people
. In the far future, it goes without saying that it can be the most harmful disadvantage that impacts
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the
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young
people
.
Moreover
, the drawbacks that adolescents set as an
example
of celebrity
life
is that they can mimic the bad tempers of these
people
or even come across as the young trend.
For
example
, Kim Kardashian who is a symptom of fashion,
people
tend to be crazy about her
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outfits, or ornaments.
This
could be related to the fact that the young pull all their revenue on these types of stuff and they particularly erase their minds having no idea that Kim Kardashian just wants to promote her domestic brand’s sales. It is detrimental for young
people
to copy the negative habits of
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popular
people
such
as smoking, drinking or even using drugs. It can be said that there are a variety of actions that celebrities do in bad ways but it is easy for teenagers to copy. In conclusion, it seems to me that there are several reasons that adolescents should not see their
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celebrities as examples to lead their own
life
. It might accidentally harm their
life
if they copy the habits of well-known
people
to their standards of
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.
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