Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

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In the information era, most
people
have modern technologies which can access the Internet that can turn some
libraries
into
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projects.To my knowledge, while
people
have better and cheaper do-it-yourself ways
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information into the brain,
libraries
are still essential for a locality. There are many arguments in
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of building free
libraries
. The
first
and most important reason is, when the Internet has become a common thing for many
people
, there are still some
people
who cannot access the Internet even today. In general, they are the elderly or the homeless or the poor, ethnic minorities living in some kind of middle of nowhere. For most of them, the
library
, from the point of view of young
people
, is the
most quiet
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place for them to update the world and learn new knowledge.
That is
to say, local councils need to reconsider the need for a free
library
, as one of their duties is to ensure that everyone has a right to education.
For example
: poor
people
and
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in some
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state
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in
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east are not allowed or
not
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have enough
condition
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to be educated.So that most of
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country
are poor and backward compared to the world.If a
country
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focus on
educate
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,Illiteracy will spread, the
country
will fall into a political and humanitarian crisis if the
people
are not educated enough to give up the grisly customs and brain drain when
the
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study again and try to escape to a foreign
country
where conditions are better
However
, it is understandable why a small percentage of
people
disagree with the
library
construction proposal. Apart from
libraries
, there are many other ways for those retarded
people
to acquire information and knowledge.
For example
, they can read newspapers, watch TV, and some of them are
also
free nowadays.
Also
, it is generally believed that learning is not the most crucial thing for those
people
, in comparison with establishing free
libraries
, the improvement of healthcare and the construction of other welfare infrastructures or just giving them financial aid
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obviously more necessary at the moment. And these measures
also
need a great deal of money and
further
aid In conclusion, while there are many other things that need to be prioritized for the town government, the right to read and learn is still important, and
thus
building a free
library
should be considered but in a higher position.
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