Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In
this
era of technological advancement,
letter
writing is slowly fading away and people ascertain that communicating through letters is not required. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
viewpoint as modern forms of communication are more convenient and efficient.
First
of all,
letter
writing is a tedious task. When one puts pen to
paper
, he or she
need
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to follow a series of procedures which is
time consuming
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. To give an example, if a person wants to contact another, they have to travel to the post office, buy a stamp, paste it and make sure that the sender's details are written precisely.
In addition
to
this
, they must place the
paper
document in the correct coloured box. Despite
this
, sometimes the document does not reach the receiver.
On the contrary
,
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modern devices are
more easy
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as we just need to draft a mail and hit the send button, which saves a
lot
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time. In short, communicating with
paper
is now become
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inefficient.
Second
of all, letters are not pocket friendly.
This
means that for every
paper
to be posted, one has to make payment for multiple reasons
such
as travelling to the post office, an envelope, a stamp and
also
letter
transportation money.
On the other hand
, an individual only has to invest in an electronic device once and communicate for free. The best examples are Facebook, Whatsapp, Google mails and Skype.
Moreover
, a person can contact another person any number of times without being charged because of internet facilities. All in all, an overseas
letter
can cost you loads whereas a Skype call will only cost you a minimum internet fee
that is
next
to negligible. To conclude, even though communicating with pen and
paper
is a long lost art, I believe that it is not essential anymore because of the modern developments of electronic devices that
has
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made it easy for us to contact another.
Also
, we can still continue
this
art of writing through laptops and mobile phones.
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