You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities
Dear Ed Sheeran,
I am writing to express my appreciation for your performance at the Scotia Arena in Toronto
last
week.
Your music was a delight to the ears, from your vocals to your instrumentals.
My friends and I thoroughly enjoyed the show and agreed that it was the best musical event we have attended in recent times.
I have been playing drums
since my school days and have always dreamed of playing drums
at your concerts. I have tried reaching out to your manager multiple times, but unfortunately, I have not received a response. I have played drums
at various events, including my college fest and social gatherings, and have received a lot of praise for my skills. Last
year, I even auditioned for the reality show Canada's Got Talent and was selected to perform. I would love the opportunity to play drums
for you at your Illuminati show in New York. I will be eagerly waiting to hear back from you. Best wishes, SandeepSubmitted by sandeepniet17 on
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task achievement
Your letter could include a bit more detail about how the singer's performance inspired or influenced you personally to provide a more thorough response.
coherence cohesion
Consider linking the last paragraph more smoothly to the rest of the letter to improve overall flow.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear structure, with a greeting, body paragraphs, and a closing.
task achievement
You adequately explained your musical activities and provided relevant details.
task achievement
The overall tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful, well-suited for the context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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