The Internet has changed the way we interact with each other now compared to in the past. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of internet
and provide a logical conclusion.
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information
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.Firstly
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is faster which is obtained by the web.This
way family and friends can easily communicate through skype across the world and anywhere in the country.Secondly
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also
has some major disadvantages like internet
addiction disorder and cyber crime
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cybercrime
activites
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e-commerce
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