You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays television is playing a vital role in our today's world.The Public is making their concentration towards

entertainment

rather than interacting with family.

it

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leads to the population becoming dumb and

Moreover

, ensuring safety measures with the crowd. I strongly agree

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that people

get

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are

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affected by television.

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essay will give the strong points why I agree with

this

and provide a logical conclusion. First of all,

entertainment

plays a major role in everyone's life

while

few are not interested because of their mind psychology. I strongly believe that movies and web series can make the crowd to apply be happy and

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makes

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us

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a

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day

very

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shorter when we are

in

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the

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bore

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bored

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.

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, in recent two

years

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most of the population

are

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has been

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work

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working

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from

homes

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home

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and few people have lost their jobs

and

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in that

times

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time

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if they want to enhance their hours decrease

entertainment

become the biggest part

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of

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everyone's life.

Secondly

,the community has

also

become lazy

due to

over

addictive

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addiction

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of

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to

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television.

This

way people are extending their hours

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late at night and not maintaining a proper lifestyle.

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issue

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these days,because of work from home because of

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I have undergone various health issues

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but it is public to be protected

with

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from

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others.

To conclude

,I strongly believe that

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public

to be occupied

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should occupy

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their time with

entertainment

rather

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than

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interaction with society.