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nowadays, almost all modern countries are faced with overweight population. •Why are the causes of this? •What can be done to solve it?

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Introduction
Amongst the most significant issues the contemporary society is desperately struggling with, obesity, which has arisen from mixed origins, has directed considerable attention to itself.
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 a critical issue, not only by the families but
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 by the government
Body paragraph 1
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 a grave challenge is normally brought about from a combination of sources, the leading of which, in
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 respect, can be poor eating habits.
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 can be explained by the fact that nowadays, people are too busy to cook meals at home and so they have to eat out in fast-food chains.
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 gives their body more calories than they need.
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,
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 condition is generally the obvious consequence of
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 lifestyle. To put it simply, it may be argued that the
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 people are willing to exercise because of busy work hours, the more fat would be accumulated in their bodies.
Body paragraph 2
Considering the probable origins for so knotty a problem, both individuals and the state are supposed to adopt and put into
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practice
 pragmatic solutions .
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, a low-calorie food regimen can be a
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 remedy in
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 case.
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 the less fat and salt we eat, the less weight we gain.
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 gives us more motivation to keep on even a vegetarian diet .Yet, the magic bullet, here, is believed by many experts to be encouraging a sporting culture.
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 suggests that as long as people are not provided with decent sporting centres where they can exercise and breathe fresh air, we cannot expect a dramatic decrease in the obesity rate.
Conclusion
The main conclusion, here, to be drawn is that the problem of
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 nation as a serious condition
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 is often created by neglecting crucial points in our lifestyles.
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, it can be satisfactorily or at least partly solved by detecting the underlying causes or circumstances.

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