Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require

Dear Sir,
This
is Jeevitha, enrolled in a short term course called Marketing Management at Conestoga College, New Zealand. I am writing to inquire about the accommodation options that
i
Change the capitalization
I

The pronoun I should always be capitalized.

show examples
could find to stay in New Zealand. I would like to inform you that
this
is my
first
time visiting an international country and I have no idea about finding a suitable place to stay. I am looking for a private room somewhere in a safe location for the time period from the 5th of January to the 30th of May.
In addition
, I would like to stay closer to avail the facilities
such
as laundry and convenience stores.
Furthermore
, I prefer houses near to entertainment facilities
such
as beaches, clubs and restaurants and my budget is between $400-$500 per month. I would be grateful if you could find some appropriate place that suits my requirements. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, JS
Submitted by jeeanay on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays: