Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require

#instructions #minutes #course #college #zealand #accommodation #officer #situation

Dear Sir,

This

is Jeevitha, enrolled in a short term course called Marketing Management at Conestoga College, New Zealand. I am writing to inquire about the accommodation options that

Change the capitalization

show examples

could find to stay in New Zealand. I would like to inform you that

this

is my

first

time visiting an international country and I have no idea about finding a suitable place to stay. I am looking for a private room somewhere in a safe location for the time period from the 5th of January to the 30th of May.

In addition

, I would like to stay closer to avail the facilities

such

as laundry and convenience stores.

Furthermore

, I prefer houses near to entertainment facilities

such

as beaches, clubs and restaurants and my budget is between $400-$500 per month. I would be grateful if you could find some appropriate place that suits my requirements. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, JS

Submitted by jeeanay on Thu Jan 06 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take.
The reason I am writing to you is regarding a set of paperwork which I sent through your postal services on 15th June from Surrey Central Post office. I sent it to my family in India but they have not received it yet.
6.5
band
Today, there are more television channels than ever before. Some people think this leads to more choices for television viewers. Others, however, believe this causes the quality of television programmes to decline. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The dialectical questions raised by the quantity and quality of television programs are subject to much debate. I personally think the tendency of having more television is a positive phenomenon, although it does cause the declining quality.
5
band
In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in some countries people believe that it is essential to spend vast amount of money on developing advanced high-speed trains throughout the cities. In opposed to those who think that money shoud be invested on upgrading existing public transportation. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives.
5
band
Some people say that when buying a product(for example, a mobile or cell phone) or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment) , price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is claimed that price of the product or service is the primary thing to be evaluate before making the purchase. From my perspective, it is inaccurate notion which is believe by others. I will discuss this in the subsequent paragraphs.
7
band
Nowadays, there are many TV shows that allow ordinary people to go on television and become celebrities, even though really, they have no talent. People should not be allowed to go on TV shows unless they can demonstrate some skill or talent that is entertaining. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, many TV shows allow ordinary people to appear freely on screen. Occasionally, these programs turn ordinary individuals into celebrities, such as Susan Boyle from the popular audition show Got Talent in the UK. However, it is true that some participants with little or no talent gain public attention, raising questions about the value of such shows.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take.

Today, there are more television channels than ever before. Some people think this leads to more choices for television viewers. Others, however, believe this causes the quality of television programmes to decline. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that when buying a product(for example, a mobile or cell phone) or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment) , price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+