You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on the course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer
Dear Mr Amiri,
I am writing
this
letter for giving my feedback about the class which was about cullinary
art in your institute.
I really want to thank you and all of your cooks who taught us how we should work Correct your spelling
culinary
at
Change preposition
in
kitchen
.Add an article
the kitchen
Also
I have learned a lot of things about decorating food which is nowadays become really Add a comma
,Also
imporatant
especially at restaurants .
Correct your spelling
important
Moreover
, I want to say that I totally had a Correct your spelling
great
grate
time and I am really satisfied with your class.
After that Correct your spelling
great
actually
I used multiple points that I have learned from your Add a comma
,actually
cheff
and all of my family noticed them,especially when I cooked your strawberry Correct your spelling
chef
cheese cake
.
Correct your spelling
cheesecake
At
the end , I want to ask you if there is Change the preposition
In
another
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other
classes
Fix the agreement mistake
class
hold
in your institute please tell me Wrong verb form
held
,
since I really desire to attend .
I am looking forward to receiving your answer and I Remove the comma
apply
hope
see you and your team soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Sara AhmadiAdd the particle
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.