You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on the course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

Dear Mr Amiri, I am writing
this
letter for giving my feedback about the class which was about
cullinary
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culinary

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art in your institute. I really want to thank you and all of your cooks who taught us how we should work
at
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kitchen
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the kitchen

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Also
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I have learned a lot of things about decorating food which is nowadays become really
imporatant
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important

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especially at restaurants .
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, I want to say that I totally had a
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great

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grate
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time and I am really satisfied with your class. After that
actually
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I used multiple points that I have learned from your
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and all of my family noticed them,especially when I cooked your strawberry
cheese cake
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cheesecake

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At
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the end , I want to ask you if there is
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classes
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hold
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in your institute please tell me
,
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since I really desire to attend . I am looking forward to receiving your answer and I
hope
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see you and your team soon. Yours Faithfully, Sara Ahmadi
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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