Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. if these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. in your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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is a global language. Not only is it spoken in large parts of the world, but it is

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the primary language of computing, the internet and, almost all other technical subjects.

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, we would at a disadvantage, by not learning it. While we learn it, we should pay attention to our mother

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too. It roots us and, is a treasure trove of ancient wisdom. So, it is

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important to ensure the survival of the local

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. I believe that there is enough space available to learn and imbibe everything. The widespread use of

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started with the spread of the British Empire. The empire spread to all the corners of the world, and so did the usage of its native

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. Those were

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the days of Enlightenment when revolutionary scientific ideas and ideals of democracy and freedom were born. These ideas spread far and wide due to the commonality of the

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and helped many people.

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, today all computing and financial transactions are necessarily done in

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, it is important for everybody to be abreast of it. Having said that, the local dialects have an ancient origin. The knowledge of the ages has been documented and transferred to the present generation by these

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. A case to the point is Sanskrit. India is an ancient culture and, a lot of important knowledge on astronomy, medicine, arts and literature has been documented in Sanskrit.

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true for the native

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of the Red Indians and the Amazonian tribes. So, how can we preserve the local dialects and at the same time master

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? We should teach children in their mother

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till grade 5, and

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switch to

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when they handle more technical subjects of math, science or finance. We should

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actively fund academic research on local

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, and disseminate the information.

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, we should try to translate all technical literature from

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to the mother

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. In

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way, we can carve out a happy co-existence of all

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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