Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a belief that book readers are more impressed with the development of
imagination
and language handling
ability than Add a hyphen
language-handling
TV
watchers. From my perspective, I partly agree with this
opinion, I would argue that language
skills
can be acquired more effectively by watching tv
and will expatiate my view with a few lucid examples.
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TV
To begin
with, reading is considered as a passion to acquire more knowledge and skills
. The brain of an individual would have more functions related to creativity while
reading. The imagination
is always combined with an individual’s creative thinking which is essential to understand things while
going through books
. Understanding about contents of a book can be considered as a combined process of watching through eyes, visual interpretation and taking a clear idea, which would normally proceed to another step of thinking of what would be the next. For an
instance, when thinking about the Harry Potter novels and films it is obvious that the experience of the novels makes a wider range of Correct article usage
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imagination
although
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series make Fix the agreement mistake
film
the
people’s mind is restricted to a frame.
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On the other hand
, the language
skills
of a person mostly rely on what the person hears and how that particular person tries to use it, similarly
the quality and the frequency of those hearings and efforts. Watching Television would be a more convenient way to develop these skills
because it is easy to reach
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TV
and listen to a large number of language
patterns and new words with visual availability. However
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comfortability
of visual interpretation always which can cause inaccuracies in developing personal vocabulary. As an illustration, children watch cartoons and learn new words and new Replace the word
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language
patterns at a rapid rate although
improvement of such
language
abilities would take a much longer period.
In a nutshell, Books
are more helpful to enhance
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Therefore
, it is clear that
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and negative
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task achievement
You should state your opinion more clearly in the introduction.
task achievement
You should provide more specific examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
You could improve the coherence by using more clear transitions between ideas.
lexical resource
You have a good range of vocabulary, but be careful with word choice and accuracy.
grammatical range accuracy
You have some minor grammatical errors. Proofread your essay to correct them.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.