You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

Dear sir/madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to you to look for a short stay
accomodation
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in your hotel. My name is June, I am from Mildura, I work in a company called Brightlight, which is a wine grapes company and I will attend a 2 days work
trainning
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training

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courses in Melbourne. I will be arriving in Melbourne on 20th Jan 2022 and I will be checking out from your hotel on 22th Jan 2022. Could you please let me know what rooms are available on the dates
.
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I
perfer
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to have a double deluxe room rather than just a single room.
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, I would like to have
spa
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in my bathroom and a 70 inches flat screen tv. I think I need a
pick up
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and drop off service as well because
this
is my
first
time
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to Melbourne. Could you please let me know as soon as possible, so that, I can organise my flight tickets
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Please call my mobile 0402043289, as I would like to discuss
others matter
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with you too. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
Sicerely
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