You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

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Dear sir/madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to you to look for a short stay

accomodation

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accommodation

in your hotel. My name is June, I am from Mildura, I work in a company called Brightlight, which is a wine grapes company and I will attend a 2 days work

trainning

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training

courses in Melbourne. I will be arriving in Melbourne on 20th Jan 2022 and I will be checking out from your hotel on 22th Jan 2022. Could you please let me know what rooms are available on the dates

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perfer

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to have a double deluxe room rather than just a single room.

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, I would like to have

spa

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in my bathroom and a 70 inches flat screen tv. I think I need a

pick up

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and drop off service as well because

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is my

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time

to come

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to Melbourne. Could you please let me know as soon as possible, so that, I can organise my flight tickets

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Please call my mobile 0402043289, as I would like to discuss

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with you too. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours

Sicerely

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Sincerely

June

junechan822Thu Jan 06 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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