You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding the accommodation arrangements for your visit. In your letter, you should: • introduce yourself and your company • ask the availability of their rooms • tell him / her your every arrangement and needs.

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Dear sir/madam, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to you to look for a short stay

accomodation

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accommodation

in your hotel. My name is June, I am from Mildura, I work in a company called Brightlight, which is a wine grapes company and I will attend a 2 days work

trainning

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training

courses in Melbourne. I will be arriving in Melbourne on 20th Jan 2022 and I will be checking out from your hotel on 22th Jan 2022. Could you please let me know what rooms are available on the dates

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perfer

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prefer

to have a double deluxe room rather than just a single room.

Also

, I would like to have

spa

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in my bathroom and a 70 inches flat screen tv. I think I need a

pick up

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pickup

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and drop off service as well because

this

is my

first

time

to come

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to Melbourne. Could you please let me know as soon as possible, so that, I can organise my flight tickets

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Please call my mobile 0402043289, as I would like to discuss

others matter

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with you too. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours

Sicerely

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Sincerely

June

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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