you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to the article on town centres published on the 05 January 2021 in the national newspaper. I am a resident of Colombo and am pleased to say that some important information was accurate,

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, the statement that all of them look alike is, in fact, an incorrect point.

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with, the wide range of shops available and the issue of overcrowding at certain times

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is true.

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, it is popular for its architecture, as it resembles the ancient time period of the town, and

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a special feature which makes it different from the others.

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, it is the only building that has enough parking facilities.

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like to let you know that I would be more than happy, if given an opportunity to take a tour around the town centre, along with the writer of the article.

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value addition. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Kathy Simon

swadhi.sivakumarThu Jan 06 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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