Providing a national system in country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourage people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on country’s financial resources. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
It is true that
money
has an inevitable role in the life of human beings. Some counties financially support their unemployed citizens by providing them with regular payments which in turn an
extra burden for the Add a missing verb
is an
government
itself. I will discuss this
view in this
essay before arriving at an opinion of mine.
On the one hand
it is argued by many that, it is really a blessing for the unemployed when authorities provide some monthly or weekly payment for them. Add a comma
,hand
This
would mean that,
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people
who have no job also
need to pay rent for their residence, water bill, electricity bill, need to buy groceries and so on. People
who have no income may depend on money
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rose
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rise
Then
, finally
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,finally
people
become homeless and at the extreme end, as daily lots of new
are reported on Correct your spelling
news
people
committing suicide due to debt through media. So, if they get money
from government
, they can Add an article
the government
also
lead a quality life. Hence
it is the responsibility of the government
to give a hand to jobless individuals by giving them a
regular payment till they become independent.
On the downside, if authorities help Correct article usage
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unemployed
by providing Correct article usage
the unemployed
money
it would make them dependent. To specific
, there is Add a missing verb
be specific
chance
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a chance
the chance
people
become too lazy and individual never search for a job as they have enough money
getting on a regular basis. Thus
, it would be extra
burden for Add an article
an extra
country
as a whole which would Correct article usage
the country
otherwise
, can use that money
for the overall development of the country. Moreover
, for some people
get too high money
through national payment system than the salary they will get if they go for work. Such
a case there is Change preposition
In such
chance
for Add an article
a chance
the chance
people
exploiting
the Change the verb form
to exploit
government
system. For instance
, in Australia, authorities provide unemployed different benefits rather than regular national payments as jobless get reduction
in electricity Correct article usage
a reduction
bill
and in Fix the agreement mistake
bills
health
sector Add an article
the health
also
. Thus
, individuals think it is better to stay without job
. As a consequence, a good number of Add an article
a job
people
think providing financial assistance to jobless
make them lethargic and dependent.
In conclusion after Correct article usage
the jobless
analysis
both Replace the word
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the
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perspective
I am of the opinion that Add a comma
,perspective
positives
outweigh the negative side as Correct article usage
the positives
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the jobless
also
have the right to live in society. I think in future also
this
trend would likely to continue.Submitted by divyaesa2012 on
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