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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019
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The given graphs illustrate information about the percentage of households and the
number
 of
hours
 doing housework in a
week
 in one country between 1920 and 2019. The general overview is that
using
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the use of
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washing machines , using of refrigerators and using of
vacuum
 cleaners increased dramatically between 1920
to
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and
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 2019.
By contrast
 , the
number
 of
hours
 doing housework in a
week
 declined suddenly between 1920 to 2019. In 1920, using
of
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apply
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the washing machine had the highest electrical appliances at 40%.
On the other hand
 , using
of
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apply
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the refrigerator had the lowest
electrical
Correct quantifier usage
number of electrical
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 appliances approximately 1%.
Additionally
 , the
number
 of
hours
 doing housework in a
week
 was the highest at 50% in the same year.
Furthermore
 , the percentage of washing machines , refrigerators and
vacuum
 cleaners
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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 similar at around 55% in 1940.
Moreover
 ,
vacuum
 cleaners rose sharply from 55% to 100% in 1980. After peaking at 100% the following year,
this
 had leveled out between 1980 to 2019.
Also
 , the washing machines had a fluctuation from 1940 to 2000. It is noticeable that refrigerator and
vacuum
 cleaner was the most popular at 100%
in
Change preposition
from
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2000 to 2019.
In addition
 , the washing machine was the lowest of all of them.
On the contrary
 ,
a
Correct article usage
the
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number
 of
hours
 per
week
had
Verb problem
was
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 the lowest between 2000 and 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, week, vacuum with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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