The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first chart illustrates the ratio of residents of a country who have electrical apparatus
such
as washing machines
, refrigerators, and vacuum
cleaners in their houses from 1920 to 2019. The change in the amount spent on housework for a family is given by
the Change preposition
in
second
chart.
Overall
, the ownership of each machine increased over the years. Additionally
, all citizens have at least one refrigerator and one vacuum
cleaner at their residency in 2019. However
, the washing machine could not reach every home at the end
of this
year. It is evident that the time consumption on
housework activities decreased over the years Change preposition
of
by
the rise of technological instruments Change preposition
of
at
houses.
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in
While
refrigerator was in none of the houses in 1920, the proportion of washing machine and vacuum
cleaner were 40% and 30% respectively. Moreover
, refrigerator ownership peaked at 100% in 1980 and stayed there until 2019. Similarly
, the vacuum
cleaner was on
everybody's home in 2020 by arising linearly between 1920 and 2020. Change preposition
in
On the contrary
, the proportion of washing machines
changed from 40% to almost 71% over the years. Additionally
, the uprise
of washing Replace the word
rise
machines
was not steady as others. In 1980, only a decline for each appliance happened in washing machines
by a dip of about 62%.
The time spent on housework was 50 hours per household in 1920. By
the diffusion of electrical devices, Change preposition
With
this
amount decreased steadily to 20 hours until 1960. Then
the velocity decreased; hence
, the duration of house activities reached the dippest level with
approximately 10 hours in 2019.Change preposition
of
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