Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime.

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adolescents in many countries. The causes of

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appear to be two areas,

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appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor here is lack ok

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for teenagers who

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outside with friends,

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time for entertainment something. To cite as an example, some parents who gain insufficient

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their children, especially, who usually feel ashamed of not having enough

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pattern appears to motivate to commit

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with unconscious inner heart. Another cause is the increasing hectic life, and parents because of social stress (traffic congestion, less wage, health problem), high pressure of workload. Turning to

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solution, the government should implement to provide

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for well-educated students, following some discount. If

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provided student incentive according to class attendance, activity,

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grade every term, it would reveal great result for us. A

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remedy might be for

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laws have to be more tightened.

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kind of activity, people could be more responsible in social starting from

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age.

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survey revealed that Venezuela, a former high ranked crime in the world, has tightened laws to reduce crime. By way of conclusion, the factors of lack of

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and hectic living style appear to be main causes. Parliamentary bodies and law enforcement agencies incorporate to may present

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situation.