Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole

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public are going on all

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groups, not well-known literacy. There seem to be three main causes, and two effects, which we will discuss here. Possibly the main cause is

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family who requires to work since young generation especially school

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family causes their children to learn new education.

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are bought that children make a living expense by working all in all out. According to

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University of Mongolia /NUM/ reveals that 20% of over 10 years old

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as meat, rice, and flour. Admittedly, some people do not learn anything even they have all opportunity to study. To cite as an example of one of my workmates, she has been working manufacturing company for 10 years as

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. Mongolian alphabet was taught by our human resource manager to her

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she did not memorize at least one alphabet, we felt blue. A

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factor is being

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to learn something

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they wish to grasp knowledge. Since some

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public

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to read books, teachers, and parents formulated some pattern books to provide

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. Turning to possible effects, an obvious step would be discrimination among the

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friends who embarrass go with outside together.

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an unknown literacy all

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from society.

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illiterate

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could not get

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. As I mentioned before about my workmate, she was fired from work soon after

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alphabet. If she had learnt to read, she would not fire anymore. By way of conclusion, there are three main causes

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to illiteracy,

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social discrimination and getting lack of job

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to be affected.

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Literacy
Illiteracy
Poverty
Access
Educational resources
Social inequality
Discrimination
Gender disparity
Racial bias
Cultural norms
Technological advances
Political instability
Disruption
Education systems
Socioeconomic status
Job prospects
Health implications
Self-esteem
Empowerment
Economic growth
Social cohesion
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Democratic processes
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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, owning a home rether than renting one is very important for people

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

In many countries, people are not looking care of their elderly relatives but seeking help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?