Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole
Globally today,
unenlightened
public are going on all Add an article
the unenlightened
age
groups, not well-known literacy. There seem to be three main causes, and two effects, which we will discuss here.
Possibly the main cause is manner
of Add an article
the manner
a manner
poor
family who requires to work since young generation especially school Add an article
a poor
age
. Not well-educated
family causes their children to learn new education. Correct article usage
a well-educated
Food
Correct your spelling
Foodstuffs
stuffs
are bought that children make a living expense by working all in all out. According to Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
recent
survey of Add an article
a recent
National
University of Mongolia /NUM/ reveals that 20% of over 10 years old Correct article usage
the National
age
groups work to earn money to buy food
Correct your spelling
foodstuffs
stuffs
Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
such
as meat, rice, and flour. Admittedly, some people do not learn anything even they have all opportunity to study. To cite as an example of one of my workmates, she has been working manufacturing company for 10 years as cleaner
. Mongolian alphabet was taught by our human resource manager to herAdd an article
a cleaner
1
hour every day for a month. Change preposition
for 1
Nonetheless
she did not memorize at least one alphabet, we felt blue. A Add a comma
,Nonetheless
third
factor is being disability
to learn something Replace the word
disabled
however
they wish to grasp knowledge. Since some disability
public Replace the word
disabled
want
to read books, teachers, and parents formulated some pattern books to provide Change the verb form
wants
reading
.
Turning to possible effects, an obvious step would be discrimination among the Add an article
a reading
the reading
social
. In Replace the word
society
this
case
Add a comma
,case
this
kind of public are
becoming Change the verb form
is
less
friends who embarrass go with outside together. Change the quantifier
fewer
As a result
of, such
an unknown literacy all age
generation
might be Fix the agreement mistake
generations
isolate
from society. Wrong verb form
isolated
Finally
, illiterate
Add an article
an illiterate
the illiterate
citizen
could not get Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
good
Change the article
a good
job
. As I mentioned before about my workmate, she was fired from work soon after Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Add an article
the taught
taught
alphabet. If she had learnt to read, she would not fire anymore.
By way of conclusion, there are three main causes Wrong verb form
teaching
lead
to illiteracy, Correct pronoun usage
that lead
besides
social discrimination and getting lack of job seem
to be affected.Add the particle
to seem
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