The most effective way to solve traffic problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

#traffic #cities #people #suburbs #countryside

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Over the

last

two or three decades,

human

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the human

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population have been increasing tremendously than ever before

similarly

the usage of transportation rate

also

increased.

As a result

traffic

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the traffic

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problem is unsolved.

However

, some think

thatthe

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that the

most possible way to cure freight congestion is people who are living in suburbs and countryside will move to metropolis. I strongly disagree with

this

opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, metropolis already

face

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a huge amount of freight trouble to compared countrysides due to the

over population

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overpopulation

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; to be elaborate, cities do not have

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a more

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residential place because it has many institutions and industries,

hence

, if the populace

move

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moves

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to urban areas, transportation would be increased tremendously than ever before.

For instance

, the Chennai head city of Tamil

nadu

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Nadu

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faces more transportation

crowed

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crowded

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due to more and more folks

move

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moving

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from rural,

thus

, the residences suffer enormously.

For instance

, in Chennai inhabitants leave to theirs' house

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6am for their's work but theirs' work starting time is 8am between two hours they stuck with freight in

everyday

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every day

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therefoer

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therefore

, they leave two hours early.

This

is not

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the

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best solution for reducing traffic crowd on road by moving people from

countryside

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the countryside

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Furthermore

, the urban place might be

faced

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face

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a hectic

situtaion

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situation

when the most populace are moved from village areas; folks who are living in

motropolitan

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metropolitan

cannot live peacefully and most of the time

wil

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will

spend for travel,

thus

, will be created more illness

such

as depression, stress, and

backpain

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back pain

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For instance

, the Times of India released a

recend

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recent

survey about the

chennai

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Chennai

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residents' diseases reasons; most people suffer

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from

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backpain and knee due to

they

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the

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most of the time spent for travel.

Hence

this

method cannot be successful. To conclude, moving from

village

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the village

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is not the best effective remedy for reducing traffic in cities

besides

urban will face more and more trouble by

this

Therefore

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I believe that will need

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the

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best way to solve

this

issue.

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

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