You ordered equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: giving the details about the equipment explain the damage suggest what you want the manager to do

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Hi Rahul, I’m Raja from Vizag city, Andhra Pradesh. I am writing

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to express my dissatisfaction with equipment that I have purchased from your website

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www.ergonomicchairsview.com recently which is an ergonomic chair, order # ESPE1009. I would like to advise you that,

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chair was damaged when I received it. The legs were broken and the hand adjustments are not working.

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, I do get some quirky noise and it is making me uncomfortable. I am not sure exactly but I guess the product got damaged in the delivery process.

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, there are no instructions on how to assemble the parts. I would appreciate it if you can replace

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product or can refund the amount as per the policy attached to

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product.

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ergonomic chair is very important for me as I am working from home and I am looking forward to a quick resolution. Thank you, Raja

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Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

156 words

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You ordered equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: giving the details about the equipment explain the damage suggest what you want the manager to do

The Greeting

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Some people think that companies and individuals should pay to clear up the pollution they produced and that the government should not pay for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Prompt: Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same events on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the growing number of populations in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a negative or positive development?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of changing people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?