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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT PARENTS HAVE THE MOST IMPORTANT ROLE IN A CHILD'S DEVELOPMENT . HOWEVER, OTHERS ARGUE THAT OTHER FACTORS LIKE TV OR FRIENDS HAVE THE MOST SIGNIFICANT INFLUENCE.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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The vast majority of the population deem that both
parents
 play an essential role in a child's nurture. Regardless of
this
 evident fact, some people argue against
such
 a statement and rely that environment has a tremendous impact on adolescents. I advocate strongly with both positions of view and am going to discuss them in
this
 essay, to provide various arguments and to give my own opinion of a represented common issue. On the one hand, a large number of juveniles incur social influence because of their weakness and defence of experience.
First
 of all, toddlers obtain core knowledge from their
parents
.
Secondly
, mother and father assist their
children
 in different actions and often give some hints or clues.
However
, it would be unfair not to mention the fact that adults contribute to the development of
children
 and teach them to read and write before primary school.
Thus
,
parents
 prepare their
children
 for society and it can be concluded that relatives are a substantial part of the child's life throughout the
first
 two decades of human life.
On the other hand
, local habitat and entertainment impact kid's minds.
For instance
, teenagers can be received dreadful habits
such
 as smoking or drinking from their friends. According to the various questionnaires, which were conducted by famous newspapers, TV broadcasts and advertisements trigger a change in the demeanour of juveniles.
For example
,
children
 are more undergo exposure to television and the Internet and often want to imitate famous actors, singers or bands. To summarise, I would stress, as I have mentioned, that surroundings have an enormous impact on
children
.
Hence
, the local state departments should concern about
this
 trouble and provide a safe area for juveniles. Even so,
parents
 must decide upon for themselves, which environment for their
children
 is more suitable for them.
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