With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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Over the

last

two or three decades, petroleum products have been facing demands

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around the world due to over usage of

this

Therefore

, many parts of the world should be mined for

curude

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crude

oil; I strongly disagree with

this

statement because our earth already faces many

enviromental

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environmental

problems.

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

with, fossil fuels can give more toxics and

harms

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effects

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the environment, these oils are released toxic like Co2,

sulpur

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sulphur

sulfur

oxide and methane.

As a result

, global warming can create and green gas

affect

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effect

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tremendously.

For instance

, a

recen

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recent

report from the Times of India said that the world faces more environmental problems than ever before namely melting the

iceburgs

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icebergs

iceberg

and the sea levels are rising

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enormously.

Therefore

, already we are facing many troubles by using harmful chemicals.

Furthermore

, some

undiscoverd

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undiscovered

locations

has

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more resources, if these sides mine, reducing the demand of petroleum products and satisfying the

humans

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human's

humans'

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demands, even though, human should not do

this

. Only some parts of the location not

demaged

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damaged

enormously,

hence

, the population should be tried an alternative to satisfying

this

demand like

solor

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solar

power

this

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unlimited

resources

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resource

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and beyond the limit.

For instance

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Norway has started to

using

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solar power tremendously

instead

of using fossil fuel

thus

they can contribute to

the

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environmental protection

among

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the globe. To conclude, petroleum goods release more harmful effects to the mother earth in order to the humans are

faced

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a lot of issues.

Therfore

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Therefore

undiscoverd

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undiscovered

places should not be mined and those venues should be

protecting

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from these effects.

Hence

, I strongly disagree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

this

process is conducive to protecting our earth from

the

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environmental

demages

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damages

damage

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Topic Vocabulary:

global demand
finite resources
energy consumption
exploiting
untouched ecosystems
carbon emissions
climate change
renewable energy
sustainable energy solutions
geopolitical consequences
territorial disputes
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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed. In which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion ?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?