With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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two or three decades, petroleum products have been facing demands

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around the world due to over usage of

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, many parts of the world should be mined for

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crude

oil; I strongly disagree with

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statement because our earth already faces many

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environmental

problems.

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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with, fossil fuels can give more toxics and

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effects

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the environment, these oils are released toxic like Co2,

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sulphur

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oxide and methane.

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, global warming can create and green gas

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tremendously.

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recent

report from the Times of India said that the world faces more environmental problems than ever before namely melting the

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icebergs

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and the sea levels are rising

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enormously.

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, already we are facing many troubles by using harmful chemicals.

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, some

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undiscovered

locations

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more resources, if these sides mine, reducing the demand of petroleum products and satisfying the

humans

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demands, even though, human should not do

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. Only some parts of the location not

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damaged

enormously,

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, the population should be tried an alternative to satisfying

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demand like

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solar

power

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unlimited

resources

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and beyond the limit.

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solar power tremendously

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of using fossil fuel

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they can contribute to

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environmental protection

among

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the globe. To conclude, petroleum goods release more harmful effects to the mother earth in order to the humans are

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a lot of issues.

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undiscoverd

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undiscovered

places should not be mined and those venues should be

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from these effects.

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, I strongly disagree with

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statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope

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process is conducive to protecting our earth from

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environmental

demages

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damages

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Topic Vocabulary:

global demand
finite resources
energy consumption
exploiting
untouched ecosystems
carbon emissions
climate change
renewable energy
sustainable energy solutions
geopolitical consequences
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