With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Over the
last
two or three decades, petroleum products have been facing demands
to
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around the world due to over usage of
this
.
Therefore
, many parts of the world should be mined for
curude
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crude
oil; I strongly disagree with
this
statement because our earth already faces many
enviromental
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environmental
problems.
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, fossil fuels can give more toxics and
harms
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effects
to
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the environment, these oils are released toxic like Co2,
sulpur
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sulphur
sulfur
oxide and methane.
As a result
, global warming can create and green gas
affect
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tremendously.
For instance
, a
recen
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recent
report from the Times of India said that the world faces more environmental problems than ever before namely melting the
iceburgs
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icebergs
iceberg
and the sea levels are rising
an
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enormously.
Therefore
, already we are facing many troubles by using harmful chemicals.
Furthermore
, some
undiscoverd
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undiscovered
locations
has
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more resources, if these sides mine, reducing the demand of petroleum products and satisfying the
humans
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human's
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demands, even though, human should not do
this
. Only some parts of the location not
demaged
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damaged
enormously,
hence
, the population should be tried an alternative to satisfying
this
demand like
solor
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solar
power
this
is
a
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unlimited
resources
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and beyond the limit.
For instance
,
in
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Norway has started to
using
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solar power tremendously
instead
of using fossil fuel
thus
they can contribute to
the
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environmental protection
among
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the globe. To conclude, petroleum goods release more harmful effects to the mother earth in order to the humans are
faced
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a lot of issues.
Therfore
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Therefore
,
undiscoverd
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undiscovered
places should not be mined and those venues should be
protecting
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from these effects.
Hence
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope
this
process is conducive to protecting our earth from
the
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environmental
demages
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damages
damage
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
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