With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?
Over the
last
two or three decades, petroleum products have been facing demands to
around the world due to over usage of Change preposition
apply
this
. Therefore
, many parts of the world should be mined for curude
oil; I strongly disagree with Correct your spelling
crude
this
statement because our earth already faces many enviromental
problems. Correct your spelling
environmental
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, fossil fuels can give more toxics and harms
effects Replace the word
harmful
to
the environment, these oils are released toxic like Co2, Change preposition
on
sulpur
oxide and methane. Correct your spelling
sulphur
sulfur
As a result
, global warming can create and green gas affect
tremendously. Correct your spelling
effect
For instance
, a recen
report from the Times of India said that the world faces more environmental problems than ever before namely melting the Correct your spelling
recent
iceburgs
and the sea levels are rising Correct your spelling
icebergs
iceberg
an
enormously. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, already we are facing many troubles by using harmful chemicals.
Furthermore
, some undiscoverd
locations Correct your spelling
undiscovered
has
more resources, if these sides mine, reducing the demand of petroleum products and satisfying the Change the verb form
have
humans
demands, even though, human should not do Change to a genitive case
human's
humans'
this
. Only some parts of the location not demaged
enormously, Correct your spelling
damaged
hence
, the population should be tried an alternative to satisfying this
demand like solor
power Correct your spelling
solar
this
is a
unlimited Change the article
an
resources
and beyond the limit. Change the noun form
resource
For instance
, in
Norway has started to Change preposition
apply
using
solar power tremendously Wrong verb form
use
instead
of using fossil fuel thus
they can contribute to the
environmental protection Correct article usage
apply
among
the globe.
To conclude, petroleum goods release more harmful effects to the mother earth in order to the humans are Change preposition
around
faced
a lot of issues. Change the form of the verb
facing
Therfore
, Correct your spelling
Therefore
undiscoverd
places should not be mined and those venues should be Correct your spelling
undiscovered
protecting
from these effects. Change the form of the verb
protected
Hence
, I strongly disagree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope this
process is conducive to protecting our earth from the
environmental Correct article usage
apply
demages
.Correct your spelling
damages
damage
Submitted by reanudeepan on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!