In many places, new homes are needed l, but the place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Space crunch is an issue of concern. In many demographic locations construction of a new house is not possible; the only possibility is to construct

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sub-urban

areas

. A group of schools opines that villages are to be protected. I refute

this

belief as

development

is a measure to be analysed based on overall progress, and those who are facing space-crunch must be allowed to construct

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in villages. The

first

cogent argument is, if it is

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of

protection

then

the

first

question arises

protection

from whom and for whom?

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mankind; their

protection

must be the

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priority. Those who are not finding

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to build

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in urban

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must be privileged to build one

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developed area.

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, a place can only be protected and developed when

people

start living there. In

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it is worth mentioning, even a few places in India were disrupted as

people

left those places and moved to a new location. In continuation to the above, for overall balanced progress, construction of all types of residential and commercial buildings are to be permitted at all the

areas

. As because

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urban

areas

are already thickly populated

therefore

housing

development

must be in

such

localities where

people

can enjoy the gift of nature.

Furthermore

,

people

with comorbidity are in need of fresh air and pure weather and climatic condition. To extend the life span of

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they may start living in society far away from

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.

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people

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ill sent to Deoghar, a less developed area, for

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recovery. To conclude, though a few

people

are in favour of protecting the backward places;

however

, I am opposing

this

idea. Preservation and

protection

are the applicable

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after

sustainable

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development

of

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