In many places, new homes are needed l, but the place available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Space crunch is an issue of concern. In many demographic locations construction of a new house is not possible; the only possibility is to construct
at
sub-urban Change preposition
in
areas
. A group of schools opines that villages are to be protected. I refute this
belief as development
is a measure to be analysed based on overall progress, and those who are facing space-crunch must be allowed to construct new
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a new
building
in villages.
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buildings
first
cogent argument is, if it is matter
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a matter
protection
then
the first
question arises protection
from whom and for whom? Development
is to be done for the
mankind; their Correct article usage
apply
protection
must be the top most
priority. Those who are not finding Correct your spelling
topmost
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a home
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a
less
developed area. Add an article
the less
Moreover
, a place can only be protected and developed when people
start living there. In this
case
it is worth mentioning, even a few places in India were disrupted as Add a comma
,case
people
left those places and moved to a new location.
In continuation to the above, for overall balanced progress, construction of all types of residential and commercial buildings are to be permitted at all the areas
. As because,
urban Remove the comma
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areas
are already thickly populated therefore
housing development
must be in such
localities where people
can enjoy the gift of nature. Furthermore
, people
with comorbidity are in need of fresh air and pure weather and climatic condition. To extend the life span of those category
they may start living in society far away from Change the determiner
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those categories
city
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the city
For example
, people
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speedy
recovery.
To conclude, though a few Add an article
a speedy
people
are in favour of protecting the backward places; however
, I am opposing this
idea. Preservation and protection
are the applicable concept
after Change the noun form
concepts
sustainable
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the sustainable
development
of human
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