Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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where digital
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communications
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entire
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world. To survive in the
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competitive
world, advertisement is an art
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majority
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of the companies are trying to master to gain the majority of the consumers share and
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is that who does
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better will be able to sustain and rule the market. One of the important
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of humans is to like or follow what other people do which are showcased in a beautiful way. If one
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succeed
doing in
this
way, people will be falling for
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trick. One of the best tools to achieve is to create an
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advertisement
with all these ingredients In my personal opinion, advertising really makes you fall into the trap of purchasing
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are really not required. I strongly believe
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which
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required does not need any advertisement because without these mandatory
things
we can't survive. Especially for
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is where
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advertisements
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real impact and retailers always bank on the basic
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vulnerability
of humans and they will
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attract
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with lots of
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interesting
advertisements. I have
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personal experience too that
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would love to share here. While watching my
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sport cricket on TV, we will have commercial breaks in between overs and
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is the time where companies target
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with ads with celebrities using a specific brand of perfume to enhance their daily life.
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know
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is not really needed but as
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like the celebrity and as they use
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that product it made me feel
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way and
finally
led me to purchase the product. So
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firmly believe with my own personal experience,
adverstisements
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advertisements
make people
to
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purchase
things
are
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that are
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not really required
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
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