The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country.
Eastern
part of Correct article usage
The eastern
country
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the country
produce
meet at Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
the
large amount as compared to other items and West part of the reason has the highest Correct article usage
a
production
in
Change preposition
of
grains
. While
the production
of meat is almost the same for both regions.
To begin
with , meat is the most popular product in the western area withAdd an article
the
diary
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dairy
second
highest production
35% . On the other side vegetables and grains
are less produced agricultural items. Reap of grains
is 15% while
vegetable has production
almost
5% above than Add a missing verb
is almost
grains
.
However
, the western part of the country produces 20% of vegetables which is almost 15 times more than the Eastern region while
the production
of meat is almost the same for both regions. Wasting of grain has the highest percentage of production
with regards 45% remaining item which is diary
produce by 15% of total Correct your spelling
dairy
production
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