Happiness if often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?

There are several
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that might occur in our
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and one of them is being happy. Unfortunately, most
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individuals
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confused
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the term “happy” itself. I personally think that
happiness
is a feeling when everything in our life runs well,
slighly
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slightly
more than we expect.
Feeling
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is a certain condition that occurs in
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brain after receiving a stimulus. It is either
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sadness
a sense of sadness
a hint of sadness
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or
happiness
, when it
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a
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happiness
, the brain produces some amount of hormonal that’s usually known as
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serotonin
. Meanwhile, we do not usually realize when and how
this
hormonal changes due to the amount of
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hormonal changes. Each individual may feel differently
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a certain situation, some people may feel happy, but
on the other
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there
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always at least one person who does not.
Thus
,
this
word has been an ambiguous term to be determined. Various factors
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been known as the reason
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this
feeling,
such
as enjoying “me time”, watching
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a football
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match, doing
hobby
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, experiencing new skills, trying a new recipe, etc.
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personally able to be happy by a simple thing like being in a natural circumstance, when my close friend can reduce her sadness by singing out loud while having some kilometres ride on the road. Due to
this
fact, it seems to me that each
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have their own way to feel their
happiness
, as long as they know how to be happy it does not matter. In conclusion, the feeling comes from our mind and since different people think differently from
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others, it will be hard to define the feeling, including the
happiness
.
However
, the definition does not matter, managing our mind is more urgent so that we can reduce to stress that might occur by being happy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subjective
  • complex
  • embrace
  • vary
  • definition
  • material possessions
  • achievements
  • personal values
  • relationships
  • self-fulfillment
  • psychological
  • physiological
  • genetics
  • predispositions
  • cultural
  • societal
  • perception
  • pursuit
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