In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the
factories
and businesses are located in
city
centers
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in many countries. Due to that
policy makers
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to relocate them
in
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nearby states. The analysis contained within the following paragraphs
explore
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both pros and cons of it.
To begin
, one of
a
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major
benefit
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is, the population of the urban
areas
be reduced by
this
decentralization. Basically, the cities are
crowed
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by the employees who travel
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daily
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basis and
also
stay in temporary accommodations in
city
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limit. These gatherings are created towns more inconvenient.
For instance
, severe traffic on the roads, limited public utilities and some resources like lands may
scares
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in
city
limit due to high population. To control the reasons which are caused to centralize people in developed
areas
can minimize by introducing new
factories
in suburbs.
Additionally
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it ups the rural
areas
goodwill since that the many businesses
such
as food industry, provide facilities and
also
transportations may newly create based on one huge industry. So again
this
is an advantage for nearby
areas
.
Nevertheless
, the distance to
factories
from
city
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is negatively affected.
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there will be additional
cost
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or transportation. As an example, the raw materials want to transport for new
factories
from
city
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as well as the productions to be sent back. The additional cost will bare by clients for
these kind
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of movements.
Thus
this
is a minus point to the subject. To conclude, despite the fact that distance to
factories
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crate
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some minus points to the owners of the
factories
, I believe that there are many plus points to the whole community development by rural industries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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