In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the

factories

and businesses are located in

city

centers

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in many countries. Due to that

policy makers

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to relocate them

in

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nearby states. The analysis contained within the following paragraphs

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both pros and cons of it.

To begin

, one of

a

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major

benefit

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is, the population of the urban

areas

be reduced by

this

decentralization. Basically, the cities are

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by the employees who travel

in

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daily

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basis and

also

stay in temporary accommodations in

city

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limit. These gatherings are created towns more inconvenient.

For instance

, severe traffic on the roads, limited public utilities and some resources like lands may

scares

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in

city

limit due to high population. To control the reasons which are caused to centralize people in developed

areas

can minimize by introducing new

factories

in suburbs.

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it ups the rural

areas

goodwill since that the many businesses

such

as food industry, provide facilities and

also

transportations may newly create based on one huge industry. So again

this

is an advantage for nearby

areas

.

Nevertheless

, the distance to

factories

from

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is negatively affected.

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there will be additional

cost

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or transportation. As an example, the raw materials want to transport for new

factories

from

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as well as the productions to be sent back. The additional cost will bare by clients for

these kind

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of movements.

Thus

this

is a minus point to the subject. To conclude, despite the fact that distance to

factories

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crate

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some minus points to the owners of the

factories

, I believe that there are many plus points to the whole community development by rural industries.