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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city.

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I hope you and your family are all well. I am very happy to connect with you again. It's been
long
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 time to see you .Now, God gave me a chance to meet you again. I want to inform You That I have decided to take a course of
lisence
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licence
license
licences
 practical nursing offered by Saint Clair
College
 Windsor. As you know, I pursued my nursing degree in India so I want to continue my
further
 study
in
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abroad so that I can get higher education In Windsor for my nursing career becauseThere are many opportunities after completing
that
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 scores .
Moreover
, I want to get information from you about
this
college
. Is
this
 a designated learning institution and Can provide a work permit to an international student?How about the staff of
this
college
. I would need help to find accommodation to stay. I want to prefer one bedroom Apartment with
attached
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 toilet and kitchen.
This
 should be close to public transport like bus and railway station so that It can be easy for me to commute the
college
.I hope you will get my proposal into consideration.I would be very grateful to you if you help me
too
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 enquiry about
college
. Give
regards
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my regards
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 to your parents. I look forward to hearing from you. Warm wishes,
MEENU
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