Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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people

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traveling

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around the globe for

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various

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reasons

and some choose to live in

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foreign

forcing

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lands for long periods. Most

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they need to speak different languages for

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with the locals and they face

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. When we living in a

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land most of the

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we need the support of the local

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community

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supermarket

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or hospital we need

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. To

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ideas with them , we need to know their language. If we can not communicate with them , it will lead to multiple practical

problems

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hands

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, miscommunication with the locals may lead to multiple social

problems

as well.

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some one

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nation, he

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unable to

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, there may be

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, if a

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foreigner

comes to Sri Lanka

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and misbehave in a holly place like

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, local

people

will punish him . If the

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unable to speak with the local

people

he will end up with

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of trouble.

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living in a country where you have to speak

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language is challenging. In summary,

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people

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nations , communication

barrieres

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of practical and social

problems

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people

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nature , I

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using a global language in future will resolve

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unplesant

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Topic Vocabulary:

linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Fully explain your ideas

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