Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. Discuss the advantagess and disadvantages of this

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vocational

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ost educational institutions still provide

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subjects

like history or social studies.

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essay will discuss the pros and cons of learning these extra

subjects

. On the one hand, academic

subjects

consume

students

a huge amount of time. Because they are not only irrelevant directly to their future job but

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, time for studying main

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heir own career goals.

This

may lead to unemployment in some practical areas

such

as technology companies because candidates have a lack of employability

skills

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but

also

in life.

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,

students

should not focus on only job-related

skills

, but academic

subjects

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because it helps people build relationships which is necessary in both w

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and personal lives.

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do not associate with the career path can broaden the horizon of

students

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the history

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of their own country makes people foster n

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a national

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spirit. In conclusion, after considering both sides of

this

issue, I am on the side of supporting academic

subjects

taught in school.

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ach subject should be allocated properly.