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Some people believe that university students should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think they should focus on acadamic study only. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Universities
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 are one of the rare and greatest assets and they bring pride to the nation. Some people argue that
universities
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 should focus on the
skills
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 for
future
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 employment whereas others want it to be for academics. To start with, let us go with the idea of the
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 set of people. When we look at the world, there has been a lot of advancements that happened in the past few decades and survival
skills
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 are the top skill
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 highly recommended nowadays. As
universities
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 play a major role in shaping up the
students
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, it is absolute to teach
skills
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 for
future
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 employment. We do have a lot of courses offered in the
universities
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 but not all may really have a decent demand in the market.
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, opting for any skill that helps
students
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 to survive in the market outside and that may help them to secure employment in
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 would be a wise idea. So learning and applying the
skills
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 practically really help. While others argue that
universities
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 should only offer academic studies which are basically a theory-oriented structure. Most of the
universities
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 are often designed to be
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 way.
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, they are always being a peer to the
students
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. Academic studies
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 offer a wide range of subjects where
students
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 can learn unlimited theories and have to apply those in the
future
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 practically. My opinion in
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 regard is that I go with the idea of the
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 set of people and the reason is that, theoretical knowledge is not sufficient to survive when they are in the job market.
Students
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 who have theoretical knowledge may face difficulties in the
future
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, whereas educational institutions that offer practical
skills
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 will help
students
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 to cope up easily at work.
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