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In some countries the average of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures coud be taken to solve them?

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the given graph illustrates information about the
number
 of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city more a six-month period in 2011. the general overview is that the
number
 of
people
 had the lowest in January.
On the contrary
,
this
 had the highest in
June
. it is the remarkable
number
 of
people
 increased dramatically from approximately 400 to 1,900.
in addition
, the
number
 of laters fluctuated from January to April. after that they climbed suddenly and peaking at 1,600 in
June
.
on the other hand
, the
number
 of telephones remains stable at around 700 from January to march.
Furthermore
, it declined sharply at 400 and no change between May to
June
.
Moreover
, the
number
 of
people
 and the
number
 of telephones grew wildly between April to
June
. In
June
, the
number
 of
people
 was the highest all of them around 1,900.
By contrast
, the
number
 of letters was the lowest all of them roughly 390. it is noticeable, that the
number
 of
people
 was the most common all of them in
June
.
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