Some people think that children should learn how to compete but others think that children should be taught to cooperate to to become more useful adults. Express some reasons for both the views and give your own opinion.

The world is becoming competitive day by day for many years.Some people say that children should be competitive while others ask them to cooperate to become worthy of

society

.I would like to say that none of these arguments is going to make them suit

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and foremost,teenagers should have competitive nature for their future accomplishments and the long journey of life.As an example when a child

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for an examination between another 5 students he needs to put in his effort more than ever.

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how he can achieve perfection from his education and the object that he wants to get.So not for the sake of

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he needs to be competitive for his own sake.

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and most importantly it is community opinion that a child needs to be friendly with others to be a better person.He needs to have good manners like respecting,sharing and obeying as a well educated one.

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,he must listen to his elders ,while he can build up his best personality by himself.

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,Those matters are reliable when the teenager is able to proceed with

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ideas for his advantage.Not for community In my,opinion

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believe that a learner will always learn through the people of

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.The best lesson is to teach him the behaviour of his elders.If they behave without any lack child will mend his ways as a great person by his own.He will be a better man once he becomes a member of

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