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In number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing publish transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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For many people around the world,the preferred method of transportation is high-speed
rail
.
Communters
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Commuters
traveling
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 to Ane
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from
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form
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formwork
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work
 rely on the safety and efficiency,which tourists appreciate the convenience novelty that train
provide
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.others believe that highways,busses and regular trains should be improved before new,
high speed
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 lines are added. Safety is chief among concerns for those who travel to
work
 or school on a regular basis.If one drives a car ,they have to concentrate on the
road
 not only to avails accidents but
also
 to prevent other drivers from causing a problem on the
road
.
High-speed
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rail
 allows the communter to leave the driving to the professional controlling the train,allowing them to get some
work
 done while getting to
work
 safely.
In addition
,people tend to move
further
 away from city
centers
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,where land and houses are more affordable.
High-speed
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The high-speed
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rail
 allows these commuters to travel greater distances in a shorter amount of time.
Tgere
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There
 is a flow-on effect here
,
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because if we can reduce the number of cars on the
road
, we can
also
 cut down on traffic jams and
road
 delays.
On the other hand
,high-
soeed
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speed
 trains are expensive,and some
believes
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this
 money could
be spend
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be spent
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 on repairing motorways which are used by cars,busses and motorcycles another possibility would be to use
this
 money to build more regular commuter trains and busses to service the ever-expanding urban populations.
Moreover
,boats and ferries could benefit from a budget
which
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 focuses more on existing forms of transport. In the end,public transport is an issue which affects us all.The taxes which we pay should be spent on the type of transport which will have the most benefit to all citizens.
In addition
,we need to take
in to
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 account how much the environment is damaged by
fossil
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 and pollution.
therefore
,I believe in order to move forward, we need to embrace the idea of
high-speed
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the high-speed
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rail
 so that future generations can continue to live safely and efficiently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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